I wrote my own Rap - Spaniard Diss Rap Battle

[Mortimer]

I stole the beat and slightly some lines from Eminem 8 miles but overall the text is my own...


https://youtu.be/WOuJPInUgwc

[Tauromachos]

Where are the rhymes?

Can you post the lyrics sorry i do not understand everything you rap there......

[Mortimer]

Where are the rhymes?

Can you post the lyrics sorry i do not understand everything you rap there......

The rhymes are in the video. Sorry if you dont understand me, maybe others can understand me.

[Tauromachos]

The rhymes are in the video. Sorry if you dont understand me, maybe others can understand me.

Did you add them also under the video on youtube?
Then i can find them there, cheers

[Mortimer]

Did you add them also under the video on youtube?
Then i can find them there, cheers

No I didnt add them, I just improvised, I dont have them written down.

[Tauromachos]

No I didnt add them, I just improvised, I dont have them written down.

Improvisation is good but try to write them down this would also help you to improve them and
add more structure

I understand you want to do freestyle battle but maybe write it down too.

[sanhadji]

good but don't count on a answer he will never expose himself he found a playground here but in the real life he suffers

[Mortimer]

Improvisation is good but try to write them down this would also help you to improve them and
add more structure

I understand you want to do freestyle battle but maybe write it down too.

Yo ... Yo... Taste my Rhymes... Feel the Beat... Yo



Guys stop with the compilation of blonde light eyed Spaniards... Look into the mirror ... you look like bolivian drug dealers

Listen dawgs I like you thats why I dont want to be the one you commit suicide though... I hate to say this but you guys are ... SSA admixed

You look like the negroes from coons plates... remember five million arabs settled in moorish spain...


Even Odelia calls you brown, ... that bitch is literally... sicilian and lebanese


You throw around brown as if it is a slur, it is a joke you are a moor


You guys are darker then my butthole


So please stop ...dont embarass yourself


Remember that if not I will take a picture of my rear end ... so you wont forget my ass...


Today I end this shit .. with a fuck you ... but have a nice day...



Regards...

[Tauromachos]

Ok thats cool but a rap text is like poem it should have some real rhymes


like
"Stop making fun of me the gorgious Roma you swarthy dwarfs from Madrid and Barcelona"

That would be a proper rhyme^

Try to do it like this

[Tauromachos]

Another rhyme "Stop with the blond and blue eyed Spaniards compilation cause you get called Moors in any real life situation"

[Mortimer]

Ok thats cool but a rap text is like poem it should have some real rhymes


like
"Stop making fun of me the gorgious Roma you swarthy dwarfs from Madrid and Barcelona"

That would be a proper rhyme^

Try to do it like this

I think it rhymes, because you have to imagine the beat to it... it depends on the "flow" and "beat" just if you read it it doesnt rhyme, but if you listen to the video it rhymes... what do you think? did you watched and listened to my video?

[Mortimer]

Ok thats cool but a rap text is like poem it should have some real rhymes


like
"Stop making fun of me the gorgious Roma you swarthy dwarfs from Madrid and Barcelona"

That would be a proper rhyme^

Try to do it like this

That doesnt sound like a "proper rhyme" either to me, but listen to my video it depends on the "flow" and "beat" i think it does rhyme and sounds like a rap...

?


https://youtu.be/WOuJPInUgwc

[Tauromachos]

That doesnt sound like a "proper rhyme" either to me, but listen to my video it depends on the "flow" and "beat" i think it does rhyme and sounds like a rap...

?

The first rhyme couple is Roma with Barcelona the second rhyme is compilation with situation, that
is what rhyme means the words most sound similar in a rhyme

First rhyme
Stop making fun of me the gorgious Roma
you swarthy dwarfs from Madrid and Barcelona

Second ryhme
Stop the blonde and blue eyed Spaniard compilation
you'd be called Moors in any real life situation

Your text didn't include any rhymes at all

See Here
t's like a jungle sometimes, it makes me wonder
How I keep from going under

It's like a jungle sometimes, it makes me wonder
How I keep from going under

Broken glass everywhere
People pissing on the stairs, you know they just don't care

I can't take the smell, can't take the noise
Got no money to move out, I guess, I got no choice

Rats in the front room, roaches in the back
Junkies in the alley with a baseball bat



https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PobrSpMwKk4

[Mortimer]

The first rhyme couple is Roma with Barcelona the second rhyme is compilation with situation, that
is what rhyme means the words most sound similar in a rhyme

First rhyme
Stop making fun of me the gorgious Roma
you swarthy dwarfs from Madrid and Barcelona

Second ryhme
Stop the blonde and blue eyed Spaniard compilation
you'd be called Moors in any real life situation

Your text didn't include any rhymes at all

See Here
t's like a jungle sometimes, it makes me wonder
How I keep from going under

It's like a jungle sometimes, it makes me wonder
How I keep from going under

Broken glass everywhere
People pissing on the stairs, you know they just don't care

I can't take the smell, can't take the noise
Got no money to move out, I guess, I got no choice

Rats in the front room, roaches in the back
Junkies in the alley with a baseball bat



https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PobrSpMwKk4



I disagree, my text includes a couple of "rhymes" and it does sound like a rap, did you even listened to it?

"I hate to say this... but you guy are SSA "admixed" with the right "flow" this is a rhyme and does sound like it and like a rap.... You got my text, with my video, check that again... I disagree with you but whatever... You have a right to your opinion, if you think it is not rap, then ok.

[Tauromachos]

Ten years ago
I used to listen to rappers flow
Talkin bout the way
They rocked the mic at the disco
I liked how that shit was going down
So tried to write rhymes
Somethin like them, my boys said
"That aint you Ice, that sounds
like them"
...
....Fact motherfuckers got scared
Cause they weas unprepared


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=scILa5iPBcg

[Figueiredo]

Wtf!!!!!

[Mortimer]

Wtf!!!!!

Make a rebuttle and diss me you can call me however you want

[Figueiredo]

Make a rebuttle and diss me you can call me however you want

That was wonderful. Congratulations!