sturmwalkure

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Just read this and you will realize you can never write something so painfully bad. I think this stands as an example of how to not write. I followed this atrocious abortion of literature and intelligence when it was hosted on fanfiction.net and I can tell you this is without a doubt painful to read. Only proceed if you are willing to lose some intelligence quotient points which will come back not to worry. It's actually pretty funny since it is so unrealistic if you can get past the poor grammar (spell check anyone?) The author is apparently British.